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I want to help you correct your grammar but I have a question about what you are trying to say. Is this what you want for Christmas this year and if you get each of these things you with do the good thing you write with it? Or are you trying to say that you did these good things so in return you want the gifts? Dear Santa Claus,This was a hard year. I think I was a good boy, as I have supported people around me. Also, I tried to improve myself and make the world around me better. To tell you the truth, I have not been perfect. Nevertheless, I want some gifts and I promise that in this year I will do a lot of good things if I receive them.- If you give me a good dictionary, I will learn oratory and will help more people with their troubles.- If I get new sneakers, I will not litter. - If you give me two cruise tickets for my friend and I, I will study hard.- If I get some cool new books, I will do my home work on time.- I will write some new songs if you give me a microphone.- If I get a new PC I will build 10 birdhouses because the PC would help me to do my projects more easily.- If I get new headphones I will be more patient, because I would be able to listen to music in the subway.- If I get new clothes, I will eat healthy food.- If you give me new watches, I will run every morning. - If I you give me armchair, I will not be rude because I want to sit in comfort and do my business.- If you give me good memory, I will learn 70 new English words a week because I want speak English fluently.That is all. I also love the New Year day just like you, I think. And I want to wish you to spend this new year in love of people who surround you.Thank you for all! Happy New Year! Vladislav, 19 years old, St. Petersburg References

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DoomkaS

1 dic 2019

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Could you check my text for grammar errors? Dear Santa Claus, This was a hard year. As I think, I was a good boy. I have supported people who surround me. Also, I am tried to improve myself and make the world around me better. To tell the truth, I have not been perfect of course. Nevertheless, I want some new gifts and I promise that in this year I will do a lot of good things. - If you give me a good diction I will learn oratory and will help more people with their troubles. - If I do not litter you will give me brand new sneakers. - If I study well you will give me couple cruise tickets because I want visit some new counties with my friend. - If I do my home work at time you will give me some new cool books. - If you give me new microphone I will write some new songs. - If I build 10 birdhouses you will give me new PC because it would help me to do my projects much more easier. - If I be more pacient you will give me new headphones because I want to listen music in subway normally. - If I eat healthy food you will give me brand new clothes. - If I run every morning you will give me new watches. - If I am not rude you will give me armchair because I want to sit in comfort and do my business. - If you will give me good memory I will learn 70 new English words a week because I want speak English fluently. That is all. I also love the New Year day just like you, I think. And I want to wish you to spend this new year in love of people who surround you. Thank you for all! Happy New Year! Vladislav, 19 years old, St. Petersburg (2)

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Charcharlatte

1 dic 2019

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I want to help you correct your grammar but I have a question about what you are trying to say. Is this what you want for Christmas this year and if you get each of these things you with do the good thing you write with it? Or are you trying to say that you did these good things so in return you want the gifts?

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Could you check my text for grammar errors? Dear Santa Claus, This was a hard year. As I think, I was a good boy. I have supported people who surround me. Also, I am tried to improve myself and make the world around me better. To tell the truth, I have not been perfect of course. Nevertheless, I want some new gifts and I promise that in this year I will do a lot of good things. - If you give me a good diction I will learn oratory and will help more people with their troubles. - If I do not litter you will give me brand new sneakers. - If I study well you will give me couple cruise tickets because I want visit some new counties with my friend. - If I do my home work at time you will give me some new cool books. - If you give me new microphone I will write some new songs. - If I build 10 birdhouses you will give me new PC because it would help me to do my projects much more easier. - If I be more pacient you will give me new headphones because I want to listen music in subway normally. - If I eat healthy food you will give me brand new clothes. - If I run every morning you will give me new watches. - If I am not rude you will give me armchair because I want to sit in comfort and do my business. - If you will give me good memory I will learn 70 new English words a week because I want speak English fluently. That is all. I also love the New Year day just like you, I think. And I want to wish you to spend this new year in love of people who surround you. Thank you for all! Happy New Year! Vladislav, 19 years old, St. Petersburg (4)

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DoomkaS

1 dic 2019

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I wrote this text mostly for practice "If"-sentences
Yeah, I mean that I'll do good things if Santa give me a gift

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1 dic 2019

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Dear Santa Claus,This was a hard year. I think I was a good boy, as I have supported people around me. Also, I tried to improve myself and make the world around me better. To tell you the truth, I have not been perfect. Nevertheless, I want some gifts and I promise that in this year I will do a lot of good things if I receive them.- If you give me a good dictionary, I will learn oratory and will help more people with their troubles.- If I get new sneakers, I will not litter. - If you give me two cruise tickets for my friend and I, I will study hard.- If I get some cool new books, I will do my home work on time.- I will write some new songs if you give me a microphone.- If I get a new PC I will build 10 birdhouses because the PC would help me to do my projects more easily.- If I get new headphones I will be more patient, because I would be able to listen to music in the subway.- If I get new clothes, I will eat healthy food.- If you give me new watches, I will run every morning. - If I you give me armchair, I will not be rude because I want to sit in comfort and do my business.- If you give me good memory, I will learn 70 new English words a week because I want speak English fluently.That is all. I also love the New Year day just like you, I think. And I want to wish you to spend this new year in love of people who surround you.Thank you for all! Happy New Year! Vladislav, 19 years old, St. Petersburg

Dear Santa Claus,
This was a hard year. I think I was a good boy, as I have supported people around me. Also, I tried to improve myself and make the world around me better. To tell you the truth, I have not been perfect. Nevertheless, I want some gifts and I promise that in this year I will do a lot of good things if I receive them.
- If you give me a good dictionary, I will learn oratory and will help more people with their troubles.
- If I get new sneakers, I will not litter.
- If you give me two cruise tickets for my friend and I, I will study hard.
- If I get some cool new books, I will do my home work on time.
- I will write some new songs if you give me a microphone.
- If I get a new PC I will build 10 birdhouses because the PC would help me to do my projects more easily.
- If I get new headphones I will be more patient, because I would be able to listen to music in the subway.
- If I get new clothes, I will eat healthy food.
- If you give me new watches, I will run every morning.
- If I you give me armchair, I will not be rude because I want to sit in comfort and do my business.
- If you give me good memory, I will learn 70 new English words a week because I want speak English fluently.
That is all. I also love the New Year day just like you, I think. And I want to wish you to spend this new year in love of people who surround you.
Thank you for all! Happy New Year!
Vladislav, 19 years old, St. Petersburg

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Could you check my text for grammar errors? Dear Santa Claus, This was a hard year. As I think, I was a good boy. I have supported people who surround me. Also, I am tried to improve myself and make the world around me better. To tell the truth, I have not been perfect of course. Nevertheless, I want some new gifts and I promise that in this year I will do a lot of good things. - If you give me a good diction I will learn oratory and will help more people with their troubles. - If I do not litter you will give me brand new sneakers. - If I study well you will give me couple cruise tickets because I want visit some new counties with my friend. - If I do my home work at time you will give me some new cool books. - If you give me new microphone I will write some new songs. - If I build 10 birdhouses you will give me new PC because it would help me to do my projects much more easier. - If I be more pacient you will give me new headphones because I want to listen music in subway normally. - If I eat healthy food you will give me brand new clothes. - If I run every morning you will give me new watches. - If I am not rude you will give me armchair because I want to sit in comfort and do my business. - If you will give me good memory I will learn 70 new English words a week because I want speak English fluently. That is all. I also love the New Year day just like you, I think. And I want to wish you to spend this new year in love of people who surround you. Thank you for all! Happy New Year! Vladislav, 19 years old, St. Petersburg (12)

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DoomkaS

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Thanks a lot!

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Could you check my text for grammar errors? Dear Santa Claus, This was a hard year. As I think, I was a good boy. I have supported people who surround me. Also, I am tried to improve myself and make the world around me better. To tell the truth, I have not been perfect of course. Nevertheless, I want some new gifts and I promise that in this year I will do a lot of good things. - If you give me a good diction I will learn oratory and will help more people with their troubles. - If I do not litter you will give me brand new sneakers. - If I study well you will give me couple cruise tickets because I want visit some new counties with my friend. - If I do my home work at time you will give me some new cool books. - If you give me new microphone I will write some new songs. - If I build 10 birdhouses you will give me new PC because it would help me to do my projects much more easier. - If I be more pacient you will give me new headphones because I want to listen music in subway normally. - If I eat healthy food you will give me brand new clothes. - If I run every morning you will give me new watches. - If I am not rude you will give me armchair because I want to sit in comfort and do my business. - If you will give me good memory I will learn 70 new English words a week because I want speak English fluently. That is all. I also love the New Year day just like you, I think. And I want to wish you to spend this new year in love of people who surround you. Thank you for all! Happy New Year! Vladislav, 19 years old, St. Petersburg (20)

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Could you check my text for grammar errors? Dear Santa Claus, This was a hard year. As I think, I was a good boy. I have supported people who surround me. Also, I am tried to improve myself and make the world around me better. To tell the truth, I have not been perfect of course. Nevertheless, I want some new gifts and I promise that in this year I will do a lot of good things. - If you give me a good diction I will learn oratory and will help more people with their troubles. - If I do not litter you will give me brand new sneakers. - If I study well you will give me couple cruise tickets because I want visit some new counties with my friend. - If I do my home work at time you will give me some new cool books. - If you give me new microphone I will write some new songs. - If I build 10 birdhouses you will give me new PC because it would help me to do my projects much more easier. - If I be more pacient you will give me new headphones because I want to listen music in subway normally. - If I eat healthy food you will give me brand new clothes. - If I run every morning you will give me new watches. - If I am not rude you will give me armchair because I want to sit in comfort and do my business. - If you will give me good memory I will learn 70 new English words a week because I want speak English fluently. That is all. I also love the New Year day just like you, I think. And I want to wish you to spend this new year in love of people who surround you. Thank you for all! Happy New Year! Vladislav, 19 years old, St. Petersburg (21)¿Qué significa este símbolo?

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Could you check my text for grammar errors? Dear Santa Claus, This was a hard year. As I think, I was a good boy. I have supported people who surround me. Also, I am tried to improve myself and make the world around me better. To tell the truth, I have not been perfect of course. Nevertheless, I want some new gifts and I promise that in this year I will do a lot of good things. - If you give me a good diction I will learn oratory and will help more people with their troubles. - If I do not litter you will give me brand new sneakers. - If I study well you will give me couple cruise tickets because I want visit some new counties with my friend. - If I do my home work at time you will give me some new cool books. - If you give me new microphone I will write some new songs. - If I build 10 birdhouses you will give me new PC because it would help me to do my projects much more easier. - If I be more pacient you will give me new headphones because I want to listen music in subway normally. - If I eat healthy food you will give me brand new clothes. - If I run every morning you will give me new watches. - If I am not rude you will give me armchair because I want to sit in comfort and do my business. - If you will give me good memory I will learn 70 new English words a week because I want speak English fluently. That is all. I also love the New Year day just like you, I think. And I want to wish you to spend this new year in love of people who surround you. Thank you for all! Happy New Year! Vladislav, 19 years old, St. Petersburg (22)

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Could you check my text for grammar errors? Dear Santa Claus, This was a hard year. As I think, I was a good boy. I have supported people who surround me. Also, I am tried to improve myself and make the world around me better. To tell the truth, I have not been perfect of course. Nevertheless, I want some new gifts and I promise that in this year I will do a lot of good things. - If you give me a good diction I will learn oratory and will help more people with their troubles. - If I do not litter you will give me brand new sneakers. - If I study well you will give me couple cruise tickets because I want visit some new counties with my friend. - If I do my home work at time you will give me some new cool books. - If you give me new microphone I will write some new songs. - If I build 10 birdhouses you will give me new PC because it would help me to do my projects much more easier. - If I be more pacient you will give me new headphones because I want to listen music in subway normally. - If I eat healthy food you will give me brand new clothes. - If I run every morning you will give me new watches. - If I am not rude you will give me armchair because I want to sit in comfort and do my business. - If you will give me good memory I will learn 70 new English words a week because I want speak English fluently. That is all. I also love the New Year day just like you, I think. And I want to wish you to spend this new year in love of people who surround you. Thank you for all! Happy New Year! Vladislav, 19 years old, St. Petersburg (23)

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